Thread:Angelo Gabrini/@comment-26816767-20160917005957/@comment-4436931-20161119013104

Shouldn't you put some dots/or a dash where the dash is? I'd change the "Galage of super with super high difficulty degree" to "A super hard galge" (or galgame in case people don't understand) and get rid of the drama/online part since those two spots are redundant. The rest looks good to me

A visual version of the above paragraph:

"A super hard galge, homemade sugoroku full of traps, dubbing anime, and net-games - Shido and the Spirits enjoy everyday life. Mukuro should also be there...but a case arises where Shido cuts too much of Mukuro's hair!?"