Thread:Angelo Gabrini/@comment-192.197.54.31-20181029152711/@comment-5224367-20181030123815

I appreciate the effort you went through to write all that, seriously. But this page isn't specifically tailored or meant for that. You're effectively writing a character synposis partly based on their relatonships with Subaru which also pratically details almost every single thing they have done the story when this just supposed an overview their relationships to him. If you want to get that detailed your better off writing and editing the character synposis pages themselves. It's not necessary to bring up every scene Subaru had with them becasue we lookikng at state of his bonds as whole, not every indivudal moment. You also restate stating stuff in some of your sentences that you already did, which bloats the the section.

You can still work on the page and write as much as you want to any of it, but I'm gonna trimmed and reorganize it to keep section the length reasonable length if necessary. Please don't misunbderstand.

And for what it is worth the stuff you just posted is a good example of it. BTW, if a mod like me or anyone else deletes your edit talk to them first before trying to change it back otherwise it will be seen as vandalism.