Talk:Rem/@comment-139.5.248.182-20200528180615/@comment-206.75.58.182-20200611115131

I wouldn't call it a rough sketch. I call it "Tappei in his rawest form". The Web Novel is not some draft, its what Tappei clear and cut wrote without any meddlesome editors. Its also much better written, yeah Arc 4 was too big and it dragged on but goddamn some of the scenes were just absolute FIRE, like the Ram/Roswaal scene. Tis' a shame that the Light Novel cut this moment out and replaced it with a Pack vs Ram vs Roswaal scene. Then there was the whole contract fiasco between Roswaal and Subaru, that was legitimately bad writing (thank you LN editors for botching that up). Characters are also much more raw, Subaru is the best example of this.

WN Subaru >>> LN Subaru anyday.